January assessment learner response

 Type up your feedback in full:

WWW: Aryan,some knowledge on the 20 mark essay  question. You know a little bit about the film csp.

EBI: your assessment grade is purely reflected of you lack of blog work.if you want to see an improved grade you have to complete the homework

LR:see blog

Q2:2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully (you'll need your Greenford Google login to access this). Write down the mark you achieved for each question:

Q1:1
Q2:0
Q3:0
Q4:0
Q5:2
Q6:5

3) Look specifically at question 3 - did you successfully write about both the preferred and oppositional readings? Did your answers match any in the mark scheme? Copy in one answer from the mark scheme that you could have used.

THE QUESTION WAS NOT DONE

question 4. Write a definition of vertical integration plus the benefits of it to revise this key industry terminology. You may find the blogpost on ownership and control helpful here.

THE QUESTION WAS NOT DONE

5) Finally, look at your 20-mark essay - question 6. Read this exemplar answer to help give you an idea of what a top-level response looks like. Then, write a new essay plan for this question, using the suggested answers in the mark scheme and the exemplar to help you. 

P1=INTRODUCTION OPINION

P2=FOCUS ON I DANIEL BLAKE

P3=FOCUS ON BLACK WIDOW